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SasuNaru-Dance ofthe Stars pt2 by ~stary202:iconstary202:



   Chapter 2- The 1st surprise confession

Kiba jumped threw the trees while carrying Naruto until he found a safe place to hide. It was a lush green, grass filled, plain, hidden among the trees.
  “Ki… ba! Why did you carry me off like that?” Naruto said, trying not to sound angry.
“Well, I wanted to ask you something. Something… important.” Kiba said, while starting to blush.
“And it’s sooo important that you had to carry me off and couldn’t wait until after I was done talking to Sasuke?” Naruto said, a little annoyed because he had wanted to see what Sasuke wanted.
“Yeah…”Kiba said, blushing heavily now.
“Fine, what is it?” Naruto said while calming down.
  “I wanted to know if… you would go to the dance with me!” Kiba said, shouting out the last few words.
   
   *Back with Sasuke*

  “Where the heck did that damn dog boy go.” Sasuke thought to himself, as he rushed threw the trees trying to find Kiba and most of all, Naruto.

   *Back with Naruto and Kiba*

“Whaaaat!” was the only word Naruto could muster while turning a bright red.
  “Ye…ah…”Kiba said, still a little pink.
“Well, I…I kind of already have a date. Sorry Kiba.” Naruto said while feeling a little guilty.
  “Oh. Well okay…then…” Kiba said, trying not to look to disappointed.
“But…” Naruto said, while Kiba perked up to hear what Naruto had to say, “I heard Hinata wants you to ask her.”
“Really!” Kiba perked up, “Well… thanks Naru-chan. Hope you have fun with your date!” Kiba said while running off to find Hinata.
  “Yeah sure! And don’t call me Naru-chan!” Naruto yelled while waving good-bye to Kiba.
  “Sure. Whatever Naru-chan” Kiba yelled, while disappearing into the trees.
  “Humph.” Naruto said a teasing frown. He’s frown slowly turned to a sad/disappointed look as he said out loud to himself, “If only I had a real date.”

  *Back with Sasuke*

Sasuke continued jumping threw the trees as fast as he could until he saw a glimpse of Kiba heading toward the academy.
  “Kiba!” Sasuke yelled angrily which mad Kiba stop dead in his tracks.
  “Oh, hey Sasuke.” Kiba said, a little frightened by Sasuke, as he held Kiba by his jacket caller, up against one of the trees.
  “Don’t “Hey” me. Where the heck is Naruto?” Sasuke said, about ready to murder Kiba for taking Naruto away when he was about to ask him to the dance.
  “Oh! You mean Naru-chan. He’s in the hidden meadow. But if you want to ask him to the dance, he already has a date. And don’t worry, it’s not me.” Kiba said while slowly getting loose from Sasuke’s grip.
  “You have no right to call him Naru-chan and what do you mean, he has a date.” Sasuke said while letting Kiba go.
  “Hey, Naruto told me himself, but if you don’t believe me, go ask him yourself.” Kiba said while rushing off to go find Hinata.
   “I will.” Sasuke said as he rushed off to the hidden meadow thinking, “That can’t be true. I was the first one Naru-chan (He has the right, by me, to call him Naru-chan) talked to. Or was I?”

  *Back with Naruto*

“I probably should got find Sasuke…” Naruto thought out loud to himself, when he sees Shikamaru wave him over.
  “I wonder what Shikamaru wants?” Naruto thought as he walked over to him.
©2007-2010 ~stary202
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srry srry srry I know it's late. Pleaze forgive me and also forgive me that it's short>:

Well here it is any ways. Pleaze comment.

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:iconsilvergirl1000:
awww,liked the story,hmmm.... This is onna be a sasunaru? I think that pairing is gettin' a little old,but... if the story's good then I will like and read it. Keep up the good work.

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92% percent of the teen population would be dead if Abercrombie and Fitch said it wasn't cool to breathe anymore. Put this in your signature if you are one of the 8% who would be laughing your head off.
:iconstary202:
Thankies and if you have any couples you'd like to see, I'd be happy to write a fan fic. for you, if I can depending on the couple, because I do take request^w^

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MY FAV. NARUTO COUPLES

1. NARUSASU
2. GAARALEE
3. SasuGaara
4. GaaraNaru
5. ShikaNaru
6. KibaNaru
7. HikaNaruSasu
8. KakaIru or KakaSaku

YAYS FOR YAOINESS>w< *squeelz* (except the last pair)
:iconsilvergirl1000:
shikanaru and shikasasu seems rare. Hmmm,I wonder if you could write one,but you don't need to. Besides,you've made me a fan of sasunaru once again. -squeal- They're just sooooooo cute. The best you can do for me is that you write a fic where the characters act like they should (Sasuke like a bastard and Naruto like a naive,stupid blonde. No offence ofcourse.). Those seem very cute fics. But in your fics,they fell in love just... like that. I mean,just to give you advice,so you could write better,try to write a story where they have to be convinced that they are in love. I mean like they start hanging out with eachother,being friends at first and then it goes on and on 'till they're together. That seems cute :3 but it's just advice,you don't have to listen to me. :P

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92% percent of the teen population would be dead if Abercrombie and Fitch said it wasn't cool to breathe anymore. Put this in your signature if you are one of the 8% who would be laughing your head off.
:iconstary202:
I like you advice.
I think I definitaly want to write one like that^w^

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MY FAV. NARUTO COUPLES

1. NARUSASU
2. GAARALEE
3. SasuGaara
4. GaaraNaru
5. ShikaNaru
6. KibaNaru
7. HikaNaruSasu
8. KakaIru or KakaSaku

YAYS FOR YAOINESS>w< *squeelz* (except the last pair)
:iconsilvergirl1000:
:)

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92% percent of the teen population would be dead if Abercrombie and Fitch said it wasn't cool to breathe anymore. Put this in your signature if you are one of the 8% who would be laughing your head off.
:iconstary202:
I did it. I did it. I wrote what I hope you asked for. I posted it to so you can read it. THis probably gonna be along one though^w^
I hope you like it^w^

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MY FAV. NARUTO COUPLES

1. NARUSASU
2. GAARALEE
3. SasuGaara
4. GaaraNaru
5. ShikaNaru
6. KibaNaru
7. HikaNaruSasu
8. KakaIru or KakaSaku

YAYS FOR YAOINESS>w< *squeelz* (except the last pair)

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