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sasunarugaara-Muffin Story pt1 by ~stary202:iconstary202:



I was inspired by ChibiSakuraChan who is a great writer and if you like my story(s) then you should definatly read hers and anyone else under my favorites Now on with the story^^


I was eating ramen and Sasu-teme, Naru-chan, and Gaar-kun had just come over. When I came into the living room (where they were) Naru-chan came rushing over to me hiding behind me like a scared kitten(or fox^^) and I turned and looked at him to ask him what was wrong. He pointed at Sasu-teme and said, "Staryyyyyy, Sasuke's trying to get me to go to the guest bedroom with him again." I looked over at Sasuke who was getting buried in sand by a VERY jealous Gaara. I quickly broke them up. I sat down with Naruto ,still grabing me by the sleeve,  and said, "Sasuke how many times have I told you to stop that while you're at my house." "Yeah Sasu- teme." Naruto said while sticking his tounge out. Sasuke just pouted while Gaara was glarring at him, which Sasuke ignored. "Now Sasuke say your sorry to Naruto and Naruto you can go sit by Gaara if you want." Gaara quickly stopped glarring at Sasuke and got amost a real smile on his face( for non Gaara fans- Gaara NEVER smiles) at the thought of Naruto sitting by him."I'm going to go make muffins so you guys get along." Sasuke just pouted some more while looking at Naruto who was blushing a deep red because Gaara had pulled him onto his lap. Gaara had a Naruto's in my lap Sasuke what now smirk on his face. I laughed as I went into the kitchen.
  I had decided to call up SaskuraChan( the deviant not sakura from Naruto) to invite her to join us for some muffins. When me and SakuraChan had just put the muffins in the oven, when we heard a sudden scream. We quickly rushed over to see what had happend. We both started laughin histarically (probably not spelled right) at what we saw. The scream had come from Naruto who was being tickled by Gaara. We also saw Sasuke with about ten kunai knifes in his hand about ready to slauture Gaara for what he was doing. When Sasuke heard us laughing, he stopped and started to turn a little pink. But Gaara didn’t stop and Naruto just kept on saying, “Gaara … stop it… your … hurting… me.” While trying to breath and laugh at the same time. This made Sasuke furious again but this time Sasuke just grabbed Naruto off the ground, picked him up, and sat on the couch with Naruto on his lap, squeezing Naruto very snug around the waist. This made Naruto quickly stop laughing and turn a deep tomato red this time and you could hear him panting very softly now, trying to still catch his breath. SakuraChan and I had just continued laughing while Gaara began to fight with Sasuke over Naruto until we all heard the timer go off for the muffins. I quickly went over to the kitchen to take them out while SakuraChan tried to break Sasuke and Gaara up and catch her breath from laughing so much, at the time.
©2007-2010 ~stary202
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Author's Comments

The idea to write this story came to me when I was typing a comment to ChibiSakuraChan after reading her SasuNaru Muffin Story which I recomend you all read if you liked mine because hers is like WWWAAAYYYY better^^.

By the way, I think I did a horrible job, so pleaze someone give me more ideas for some more stories so I can get more practice.

:iconsasuxnaru-club: has permission to use this.

Pt.2 [link]

Pt.3 [link]

Pt.4 [link]

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:iconstary202:
I also forgot to mention that you guys can decide if I should continue it or not because if you all hate I won't post the next part.

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MY FAV. NARUTO COUPLES

1. NARUSASU
2. GAARALEE
3. SasuGaara
4. GaaraNaru
5. ShikaNaru
6. KibaNaru
7. HikaNaruSasu
8. KakaIru or KakaSaku

YAYS FOR YAOINESS>w< *squeelz* (except the last pair)
:iconchibisakurachan:
i think its cool.
My real name is Sakura so woot
this is insanely weird but funny and im glad i could be put into the story.
i'll read the rest soon.

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Latida........:heart:
:iconstary202:
Thankx Sakura
Your also in my next story called SasuNaru- the play
I'll post it soon

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MY FAV. NARUTO COUPLES

1. NARUSASU
2. GAARALEE
3. SasuGaara
4. GaaraNaru
5. ShikaNaru
6. KibaNaru
7. HikaNaruSasu
8. KakaIru or KakaSaku

YAYS FOR YAOINESS>w< *squeelz* (except the last pair)
:iconcatdemon1312:
aaawwww thats cute ^^ i like this story alot ♥
:iconsanakurata4u:
LOL
HOW CUTE!

Just remember though.
If you're going to write in 1st person, don't forget to state whose POV (point of view) it's in.
I'm pretty sure it was you as the narator person, but just don't forget that.
*smiles*

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Yaoi is hot.
Yaoi is sexy.
Yaoi haunts your dreams.
Yaoi is an obsession.
Yaoi is SasuNaru.
:iconstary202:
oh srry ^^;

thanks for the advice and comment.

WHO WANTS TO BE IN MY NEXT STORY? I need as many people as I can. If YOU do then go to my profile, go under my journal and tell that you would like to be in it^ ^

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MY FAV. NARUTO COUPLES

1. NARUSASU
2. GAARALEE
3. SasuGaara
4. GaaraNaru
5. ShikaNaru
6. KibaNaru
7. HikaNaruSasu
8. KakaIru or KakaSaku

YAYS FOR YAOINESS>w< *squeelz* (except the last pair)
:iconsasu-fan-guurl:
It's super cute! I love it! Heh, I'm not a fan of GaaNaru, but it's still so adorable! I will keep reading! ;)

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I'm Naruto.
My precious husband is Sasuke.
:heart:MiiKaze:heart:
Miimochi & Kaze-Hoshi 4 ever.
:iconstary202:
Thanks^v^


WHO WANTS TO BE IN MY NEXT STORY? I need as many people as I can. If YOU do then go to my profile, go under my journal and tell that you would like to be in it^ ^

--
MY FAV. NARUTO COUPLES

1. NARUSASU
2. GAARALEE
3. SasuGaara
4. GaaraNaru
5. ShikaNaru
6. KibaNaru
7. HikaNaruSasu
8. KakaIru or KakaSaku

YAYS FOR YAOINESS>w< *squeelz* (except the last pair)
:iconashamapash:
lol very kawaii=]

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